Friday, February 20, 2009

Wish I Cud Keep U LONGER.......

This song is dedicated to a gr8 friend who asked for somethin on love,sorry dude dis isn't mah taste but i tried,hope i didn't disappoint u..........


All i wanna do is dream,
It's d only place where u r wid me,
Wish i cud keep U much Longer........

The High Mountains,
The Rising Sun,
Just U, me n snow.....
All i wanna do is dream....

The Lonely Gardens,
The Warm Sun,
Just U, me n our love.....
All i wanna do is dream....

The Solitary Beach,
The Setting Sun,
Just U, me n our dreamz.....
All i wanna do is dream....

The Deep Woods,
The Shining Moon,
Just U, me n the falling dew.....
Wish i cud keep U much Longer.....

All i wanna do is dream...
Wherever we r, all i want is YOU....
I jus wanna keep U much longer,
Jus wanna look in ur eyes forever,
Jus wanna listen u laugh forever,
All i wanna do is Dream,
I jus wanna keep U LONGER.......

7 comments:

R_Square said...

Stunning Poem Brother
Keep goin
all d best

Anonymous said...

ohho..........
Nice yaar......Keep Writing!!
:-)

Anonymous said...

Its good yaar...really speaks about what you think..or rather 'dream'...

Shreyan Hota said...

Gr8 frnd... Interesting...
Not mah taste? You kiddin or what? After readin this poem, one can easily conclude that u r smitten... struck down by the wunderful thing that is luv...
Man at first the lappi was a good two feet frm my face when i started reading, by the end, my nose was inches from the screen, my heart was beating like mad, and i was smiling spontaneously, even a pervert will melt after reading this poem...
Yo! man! Publish books as well as blogs...
Don't stop posting the goods...

Dipesh said...

u need alot of improvement,
ur english is horrible,
there is always a double meaning in ur sentences

Unknown said...

abe ye bata kaha se chori kari............

Unknown said...

really nice..........
make 'her' read when u find 'her'!!