One more important thing about dis poem....
Dis poem seems 2 go nowhere until n unless u giv a real thought...
N YES AFTER U READ DIS VERSE ONCE PLZ READ IT AGAIN WID RESPECT 2 D LAST LINE!!!
I am walking on a path...
The path goes nowhere,
The path goes everywhere...
The path is undefined,
The path is self-defined...
The path is neglected,
The path is left behind...
The path is confusing,
The path is astonishing...
The path is crude,
The path is a tribute...
The path is a reflection,
The path is an obsession...
The path is too dark,
Though the path is to enlightment...
The path has too many forks,
Some forks go nowhere,
Some forks lead everywhere,
Some forks go in circles,
Some forks are desired,
Some forks undesired...
The path can't be understood,
The path has no map...
"For the path i am on,
Originates from me and Converges into me!!!"
The path goes nowhere,
The path goes everywhere...
The path is undefined,
The path is self-defined...
The path is neglected,
The path is left behind...
The path is confusing,
The path is astonishing...
The path is crude,
The path is a tribute...
The path is a reflection,
The path is an obsession...
The path is too dark,
Though the path is to enlightment...
The path has too many forks,
Some forks go nowhere,
Some forks lead everywhere,
Some forks go in circles,
Some forks are desired,
Some forks undesired...
The path can't be understood,
The path has no map...
"For the path i am on,
Originates from me and Converges into me!!!"
3 comments:
akshat though rt now i don't have time to post my full comment but i was just goin thru ur masterpiece and couldn't restrain myself from just telling you that i think i have understood the thought that triggered u to pen it down....if i m not mistaken then it is the Quarter-Life-Crisis which we both went and ARE goin thru...the mistakes of the past and the unanswered questions of life seem to be the underlying overtones of ur poetic thread...but boy gr8 piece of words...i will post my full comment soon....sorry for the time being.....
dude,i'm visiting ur blog for the first time...and all i can say is that it was miles better than my imagination....though i always knew that ur poetry has that x factor in it which leaves reader to think upon..class poem..imust say...hats off to u....
Dude!
I've read a LOT of poems.
But this is one poet who makes me want more from him!
Man what uniqueness in his poems, modernness emanating from every syllable...
Cool, man!
You MUST write more!
If u ever stand up for prez, u'll surely have one vote, mine....
UPLOAD MORE POEMS!!
PS plz write love...
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